Plz correct this essay.... “When a man acts like a child, it makes his wife act like his mother …?

“When a man acts like a child, it makes his wife act like his mother … and you can’t make love to your mother.”





I find it interesting to note what happened in the Garden of Eden after man had sinned. You see, each of the people there involved was punished in a given area.


· To Adam: The ground would be cursed, and he would die.


· To Eve: Pain in child birth and the husband would rule over her. (but it is practically opposite)


That God put this in place at this point in time says to me that this was not the case in the Garden. I think we gain a further insight into the Garden relationship by looking at how Eve got Adam to sin– something Adam knew he shouldn’t do. That’s why they say that women cry before marriage and men cry after marriage.


We could get into the fascinating discussion of why Adam ate, but the point was that Eve and Adam had an equal relationship– something that wouldn’t be possible with a sin nature. So, God did what needed to be done– He selected someone to be the leader of the couple, and did so by His divine will. That is a famous quotation which shows the evil nature of men “Heaven will be no heaven for men if they meet their wives there.


The problem is, sin likes to promote self. In the case of Eve and every woman after her, it is not in human nature to be pleased with having someone over us, and for “no apparent reason.” If you add up human nature and the current state of feminism you see that rather than being homes that are set up as God ordained in Genesis, we have homes that are set up the exact opposite, with women dominating their husbands or exacting concessions out of him for they very benefit of being in the wife’s presence or bed.


Since we know from the Word of God that women have a weakness for domination, are you as a wife on guard that you do not dominate your husband? This is something that requires a lot of work and attention for it’s easy to fall into the trap.


I would lump in here the propensity to equate your husband with one of the children– someone that you can order around and treat diminutively simply because you’re better at manipulation, emotions, or whatever it is that you know about him and how to push his buttons.Plz correct this essay.... “When a man acts like a child, it makes his wife act like his mother …?
Sorry I'm heading to bed and can't correct the whole paper, but a comment on style that might help; when you write an essay that contains a lot of opinions, avoid using ';I think, I believe, it is my opinion that';...etc You are writing it, so the reader knows it is your opinion.


An example would be your first sentence, ';I find it interesting to note that...';. An improved version of that sentence would be ';It is interesting to note that...';


Hope that helps a little